The Sorting · YA Dystopian
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The Ceremony

YA Dystopian · ~2 min read · 476 words

The Sorting happened in the Grand Hall of Calder Prime, under lights bright enough to hurt.

Maren Dahl stood in line with eleven other sixteen-year-olds from her district — all of them Grower stock, all of them expecting the green light that would keep them home.

The machine was a column of glass and copper wire, taller than a man, humming at a frequency that made your back teeth ache. You put your hand inside. The glass read something in your blood. The light told you who you were.

Green for Growers. Blue for Builders. Gold for Healers. White for Keepers. Red for Erasers.

No one from her district had ever gone red.

Maren had spent sixteen years learning soil chemistry, irrigation tables, the rot patterns of summer wheat. Her mother's hands were permanently stained with earth and she wore it like a badge. Her father knew every field in the eastern district by name. They were Grower people. The machine would see that.

She put her hand inside.

The glass went cold. The hum climbed a register. The light that came up was not green.

It was red.

She heard someone gasp — her friend Petra, probably, the only one close enough to see her face. The hall was perfectly silent otherwise. The Sorting Master looked at his tablet and then at Maren with the expression of someone confirming a number they'd hoped was wrong.

"Maren Dahl," he said. "Assigned: Eraser Corps."

Her mother made a sound behind the partition.

They didn't let her go back to say goodbye.

The Eraser handlers came for her while the ceremony was still running — two of them, black uniforms, no insignia she recognized. They moved her through a side door before the next child had finished with the machine. Outside, a vehicle was already running, engine low.

"Can I—" she started.

"No," one of the handlers said. Not unkindly. Just final.

The vehicle had no windows. She sat on a metal bench in the dark and tried to remember what people said about Erasers. Nothing useful — everyone said nothing useful. They came from the Sorting and didn't come back. Occasionally you heard a name and then you didn't hear it again. The official line was civic service, necessary work, honorable designation. The unofficial line was silence.

Her mother had never spoken about Erasers in her presence. Not once.

The vehicle moved for two hours. When it stopped, the handlers opened the doors onto a loading bay lit with white industrial lights and the smell of cement and recycled air.

A sign on the wall read: WELCOME TO LEVEL ZERO.

Underneath it, someone had scratched a single word into the paint with something sharp. She had to get close to read it.

The word was: RUN.

She didn't run.

She didn't know yet that she should have.

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